Blind and Bound
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In a critical look at this write, which I did hurriedly
This morning, I am slightly uncomfortable about
It's brusque'ness, which to an extent the rhyme
Scheme, had imput.. As I have the utmost sympathy
With any who were blandished or bullied Into
The false corona virus narrative..' God bless all.'
For the life of me, and others all
How did people, heed that call?
Who cry; that faith in Christ if blind?
Would hamper freedom/choice of mind.'
Yet sonorous blasts on death and gloom
Were watched piecemeal in every room
So many put such, faith in flesh '
To me a challenge; although I'm blest '
Lord thank you for the others here
Who still, stand strong g'ainst pure fear.'
We know of honeyed lies, untruth
The graphic claims no depth, too uncouth'
And from their filth they call out still
Would you become a minion?
Can they break your will?
Copyright © Joe Maverick | Year Posted 2022
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