Blessing To My Child

A pillar of greatness is born finally! Here is the light of the sun to all Life's challenges you'll assuredly be stubborn and every battle is already won with victory confirm and done. You'll stay true to your cause like the dedication of a nun the wheels of your prosperity will roll on and on. Those hiding in ambush to your success will starve, dehydrate and mourn you'll be the stalk to which nations will stick to like corn. stretching forth your hands to generations you'll affect lives and have fun as your good deeds will be heard like blowing a large, loud horn Your face will not be common but you'll be a global icon like the city of London. One blast of the trigger and misfortunes run guess what! You are the gun. The world needs a new life changer Oh my child! It is now your turn.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Sietesantos Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 9:34 AM
Excellent piece, Funom! Deep and powerful as usual! Pandita
Makama Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 12:31 PM
Thank you so much Pandita
Dietrich Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 12:34 AM
I love that line about the stalk to which nations will stick to like corn. Very vivid. . A child to blast the world with peace and love. he would be indeed blessed.
Makama Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 10:40 AM
Thanks for your encouraging and wonderful words
Dietrich Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 12:32 AM
glad you enjoyed my poem so much. The contest judge did not enjoy it nearly as much!! Ok, now let me read this poem of yours!!
Makama Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 10:39 AM
Thanks Andrea
Harrell Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 9:14 AM
I like this! Thanks, Funom! Haven't heard from you in a while :)
Makama Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 2:08 PM
Ohh! Thanks a lot Toquyen.. I have been busy, being a medical practitioner, but once in a while, just like now, I come by and post a poem or two. Thanks a lot for your encouraging words and care. I will definitely come by your pages.
Mac Donald Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 12:02 PM
Ah, I'm so slow to comment on your work, sorry Funom.:( Actually, I did read this before! I had found it difficult to write a worthy comment. Today as then, I feel rocked by this write. "you'll be the stalk to which nations will stick to like corn." I am blown away by your choice of subject and imagery. Keep well have a great Easter! Mkki
Makama Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 2:05 PM
Thanks a lot Michelle. It doesn't matter how fast you comment, the truth of the matter is... I am so so encouraged by your words and they are indeed so uplifting. Thanks for been there for me.
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April 5, 2014 at 7:23 PM
There was a child born in a stable who's power extends beyond any earthly ambition and his father is greatly pleased. All who ask for it can access his power and become children of the living God. Your poem creates many thoughts, the sign of a talented poet.
Makama Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 10:44 AM
Thank you so much Richard, for ur enriching words....
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