Blesses To the Buried

Do you even understand
Every single strike you get
Do you even realize
Your time is up and will never be the same
Is in your heart
Is in your mind
By every little second by
With all little rocks in the road
Keep walking to a endless road
A highway that will take you to heaven know
Do you believe in me
Do you understand

But with every meaning in hands
And all the questions in mind
By all there is to fight
And all we know to drown
Beautiful sunrise turns black
Nightmare awakes tonight

The pieces are put in place
With candles and god nothing is answered
Praying will never help you now
Because im the one waiting here
Because your soul is quite sweet to even look at
Reckoning to the heart of the dead
Blesses to the ones underneath
This is not such a bad place
This is just the meaning of what you forget
With every little piece in place
Only fire will be the door to...
But give me your soul
I promise i will set you free (To hell)
I am loyal to my word (While I burn you down)
Break me through because i (Burn) live on hot and hotter

But with every meaning in hands
And all the questions in mind
By all there is to fight
And all we know to drown
Beautiful sunrise turns black
Nightmare awake tonight
But anyways bury me deep
I don't want to be part of you anymore
Bring me down
Just eat my soul away

But with this beautiful ways
And that there is onward to you
With my heart on hand
And all i know
This is just the death of no one
I dig my grave deep 
I see through you
Only hate i can overlook
With all we have
And all there is
Please give me a chance
For you
For us
For more
I fight
For you
For us
For more 
I die

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/29/2011 11:25:00 PM
I wish i could understand every strike i get. Love the will of your poem,,, thank you for sharing,..p.d.
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Derek Ortiz
Date: 9/23/2011 12:00:00 PM
Do not worry, understanding ain't knowing bursátil remembering for the time is roght... For you.
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