Geoffrey Brewer Poet Verse

Blessed Day Qd

It was no propitious day it seemed
The misty rain overlong prevailed
A feeble sun, time to time had gleamed
Through vaporous  clouds on landscape veiled
I made my farewells to friends no more
And took to the streets now dark and damp
My life uncertain no pathway sure
I lingered under a dim street lamp
That instant saw it would all be right

24 September 2019

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Jan Allison October 10, 2019 at 6:52 AM What a lovely uplifting ending Geoffrey out of the dark you brought light, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Geoffrey Brewer October 10, 2019 at 12:54 PM Thanks as always for your support, Jan xx

P.S. Awtry October 1, 2019 at 9:22 AM well done! love the message here. all the dreary dim and grey... then suddenly all is ok. I was surprised and had to reread (sign of good poetry in my mind) and the aha. Reads like a winner to me! Geoffrey Brewer October 4, 2019 at 3:39 AM Many thanks for your detailed comments, PS.

Swetha Vangaveti September 25, 2019 at 11:45 PM "I lingered under a dim street lamp That instant saw it would all be right"- nice words and it's always important to end the day on a positive note for all of us. Geoffrey Brewer October 1, 2019 at 3:37 AM How true! Thank you, Swetha.

Gershon Wolf September 24, 2019 at 4:04 PM I'm with Richard (below); I like to see hope at the end. Cheers, Gershon Geoffrey Brewer October 1, 2019 at 3:34 AM Thanks and cheers, Gershon.

Richard Lamoureux September 24, 2019 at 7:15 AM You brought hope into a shadowy realm. Geoffrey Brewer October 1, 2019 at 3:33 AM Hope comes in the strangest situations. Thanks for your response, Richard