Blessed Day

Striated gray and deep pink sky
Fiery red sun rises
As roosters' breath fogs with each crow
And floats with surprises

As cold surrounds every shrub's leaf
An open door sun greets
Another day's blessing a gift
A soul who now's at peace
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Maverick Avatar
December 23, 2013 at 2:37 PM
Great pieces of country life in this Sara, keep well Joe..'
Horne Avatar
December 22, 2013 at 4:51 PM
love this beautiful write, Sara
Sergi Avatar
December 22, 2013 at 1:31 PM
One should always see each day as a blessing. Sara a very beautiful write.
Sathasivam Avatar
December 22, 2013 at 8:29 AM
Excellent. Beautiful write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs I wish you a Merry Christmas and a very happy new year for 2014.
Peterson Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 7:34 PM
A poet warms the winter far more than the sun. Thanks for making the cold more bearable. Merry Christmas.
Jones Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 6:09 PM
Beautiful Sara...everyday is a blessing..expressed beautifully by you here...
Andresen Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 3:50 PM
- Sara, a joy and delight to read! - Happy Christmas!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Hamilton Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 3:24 PM
tender loving and beautiful Sara great write Shadow x smile hug
Lamoureux Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 3:09 PM
I miss living on the farm especially after reading this lovely piece.
Sivey Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 1:13 AM
This is a truly enlightening write my friend! You have delighted me by the splendor of this wondrous poem this evening! What a fantastic piece, i hope this poem is in refection of good news you have had bestowed upon you! Great Work!!
Guzzi Avatar
December 20, 2013 at 6:58 PM
Country life brings this to you I don't know how city dwellers can stand not having the sky or the fields? happy Holidays! Light & Love
Carroll Avatar
December 20, 2013 at 2:39 PM
Hi Sara, Carpe diem! Nice write.. Ken
Onclaud Avatar
December 20, 2013 at 2:25 PM
how uplifting is this flowing piece so full of grace, sara... how lovely!.. huggs
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