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Bleeding Victory

Hope in my heart never fails to cease, It triumphs over pain,victories these, The butterflies in my stomach flutter.. Picked one,held her wings and cut her. You said her name,and then the silence Pain triumphed over hope and then stopped the violence.. The dark floor glistened with my tears, The mental pictures of us,cut with shears. Her thoughts fill your head, you cant help but smile.. But you were my soulmate love, the one to walk me down the aisle! I've seen her, the beauty soft,timid at its radiant best.. My love for you dies,rots,worms infest! The shreds of my heart burnt and torn apart.. Well the dartboard feels the pierce of every dart... Fell to the floor, phone in my hand,line dead... Weeped and weeped till my eyes were a bloody shade of red.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/21/2016 2:35:00 PM
Nikita, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 11/3/2011 11:29:00 PM
Waiting for a Haiku....give us one ffasssssssssst.....
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Nikita Mitra
Date: 11/5/2011 8:24:00 AM
:P Haiku coming right up!!
Date: 11/2/2011 12:32:00 PM
KEEP THE WRITING GOING,let the quinine ink flowing.
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Nikita Mitra
Date: 11/5/2011 8:24:00 AM
:P Thanks. Will do!
Date: 10/27/2011 10:35:00 PM
A great poem to end the night. Very, Very well done! Thank you so much; Curtis.
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Nikita Mitra
Date: 10/28/2011 11:56:00 AM
:) Thanks man! No problem!
Date: 10/27/2011 10:55:00 AM
full of imagery... felt this. thanks for the read:)
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Nikita Mitra
Date: 10/29/2011 7:06:00 AM
:) Aww. No prob!
Date: 10/26/2011 9:36:00 PM
wow. interesting write. - JH
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Nikita Mitra
Date: 10/29/2011 7:07:00 AM
:) Thanks!
Date: 10/26/2011 6:29:00 PM
Very moving and heartfelt poem. I could feel your pain as I read this poem. Gripping with emotions and sadness. Thank you for sharing and May God Bless!
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Nikita Mitra
Date: 10/29/2011 7:08:00 AM
:) Yes! Thankyou, it was written in a very heartbroken period of my life.
Date: 10/26/2011 5:05:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Nikita. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Nikita Mitra
Date: 10/29/2011 7:10:00 AM
Thanks Carol! This is a very warm welcome. :) YAY! Thankyou for being so nice. :) Tc!
Date: 10/26/2011 4:00:00 AM
Loved it!
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Nikita Mitra
Date: 10/29/2011 7:10:00 AM
:) Thanks!

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