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BLEEDING SKIES

Flaming shperiods descend As the clouds swirl frenziedly Uprooting erections The seas withdraw then rise To swallow the earth As death enters The grounds depart To sail the seas As ember paints the skies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/17/2012 6:48:00 PM
the title also caught my eye...loved the images in this....great poem :)
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Date: 6/17/2012 11:53:00 PM
your powerful images take me to this futuristic scene, ronny.. best wishes in the contest and huggs!.. a gem!
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Date: 6/17/2012 1:59:00 PM
I was intrigued by the title, then realized it was for the contest. Should do well, nice series of haiku.
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Date: 6/17/2012 8:09:00 AM
Marvelous! End of the world is truly depicted! Best of luck in the contest!
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Date: 6/16/2012 8:35:00 PM
Good luck in the contest..intense write!!
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Date: 6/16/2012 5:37:00 PM
Nice write on this series of haiku. Good luck on the contest. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 6/16/2012 5:35:00 PM
excellent..xox~pd
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Date: 6/16/2012 4:14:00 PM
Very descriptive work..Good luck in the contest..Winners' list for sure..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments were encouraging..Sara
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Date: 6/16/2012 7:22:00 AM
Beautiful words...Many blessing ...Peace be to you are your family my friend.
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RONNY MADONSELA
Date: 6/16/2012 7:29:00 AM
thanx man.