Ronny Madonsela Poet Haiku

Bleeding Skies

Flaming shperiods descend
As the clouds swirl frenziedly
Uprooting erections

The seas withdraw then rise
To swallow the earth
As death enters

The grounds depart
To sail the seas
As ember paints the skies

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Sandra Adams October 17, 2012 at 6:48 PM the title also caught my eye...loved the images in this....great poem :)

Nette Onclaud June 17, 2012 at 11:53 PM your powerful images take me to this futuristic scene, ronny.. best wishes in the contest and huggs!.. a gem!

Joann Grisetti June 17, 2012 at 1:59 PM I was intrigued by the title, then realized it was for the contest. Should do well, nice series of haiku.

Anoucheka Gangabissoon June 17, 2012 at 8:09 AM Marvelous! End of the world is truly depicted! Best of luck in the contest!

Pace Ink-U-Script June 16, 2012 at 8:35 PM Good luck in the contest..intense write!!

Phyllis Babcock June 16, 2012 at 5:37 PM Nice write on this series of haiku. Good luck on the contest. God Bless Phyl

Poet Destroyer A June 16, 2012 at 5:35 PM excellent..xox~pd

Sara Kendrick June 16, 2012 at 4:14 PM Very descriptive work..Good luck in the contest..Winners' list for sure..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments were encouraging..Sara

Steven Henderson June 16, 2012 at 7:22 AM Beautiful words...Many blessing ...Peace be to you are your family my friend. Ronny Madonsela June 16, 2012 at 7:29 AM thanx man.