Blast Off

We were strapped in ready for take-off,
the engines churning all around us.
We'd longed for this moment,
but when it came we were scared rigid,
wondering if we'd survive.

"Countdown to take-off!" the captain roared.
Gritting our teeth we made ready.
pushed hard into our seatbacks with stomachs
turning cartwheels we were off at last!
bright lights and bogus noises
surging from under the blankets.

There was a wobble and a whistle,
the signals to burst out at warp speed.
Our bodies felt the rush, the rumble 
and finally the jolt of the touch down.
"Look out the peephole!  We're on the moon!"

the captain cried. And sure enough, we weren't
in Kansas anymore.  The moonscape was
strangely full of familiar looking objects,
Grandma's afghan flowing like a river,
what looked like the pillows 
from Jimmy's bed, crumpled like space debris,
and my school project, a volcano
puffing out baking powder.
Yep, this was the moon alright.

"Imaginations still intact," Jimmy yelled,
"but how are we gonna get home?"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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O'Leary Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 12:51 PM
Surprise ending... well done!!
Bickerstaffe Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 1:36 PM
Thanks for you encouragement and support Terry... Best wishes, Keith
Bauer Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 7:50 PM
this is just precious, keith! i love the little hints you gave at the beginning but you pulled me in, anyway. a most delightful poem...
Bickerstaffe Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 7:52 PM
Thanks Ilene... much appreciated! Keith
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