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Rifles rattle,
Armies battle
On the plain,
Getting glory,
Grief, or gory
Colored pain.

Conscripts giving
Up their living 
For a patriotic bed
That is bag-shaped,
Shrouded, flag-draped:
Blue, white, red.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Spence Sr Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 2:17 PM
This is a wonderful poem. I really like the colors in the last line. Congratulations on being featured. Great job! Joseph
Brown Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 5:52 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Steve. Love, Carol
Mason Avatar
June 17, 2010 at 7:47 PM
Stark and honest write here, Steve. Congratulations on your writing being featured this week.
Beer Avatar
June 17, 2010 at 6:28 PM
Steve, this is a beautiful poem. Wouldn't it be wondeful if the world could learn to get along with each other and we never had to use the last verse of your poem. Keep up your good work. God Bless, Cile
Muzzey Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 5:36 AM
Congrats on being featured this week with this wonderful tribute to our fallen soldiers. Caryl
Freeman Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 8:00 AM
Congrats. Steve, on a great poem feature this week. Agape, Moses
Fisher Avatar
June 14, 2010 at 1:38 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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June 13, 2010 at 9:57 PM
Congratulations to a talented poet. Love, Iolanda
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June 13, 2010 at 6:34 PM
A necessar evil at times but the last few were for egos and greed. Congrats on the feature. Vince
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June 13, 2010 at 2:57 PM
Powerful poem. Much captured in this concise piece. Congratulations on being featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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