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A lone palm tree near the beach
Sometimes groping for something in sky
Some other time coming down on the ground
Seek frantically a lovely eye
Eyes do come but palm stays calm
On the beach smile bottles of rum

A lone river towards the ocean
Gazing above at the floating cloud 
In between a vast vacuum
Aspiring to sing aloud
No sound resonates in the voice box
Quick passes the grey sly fox

There are times when the river leaves me
Robbed of all chime air is paranoid
Page after page keeps crying empty
Lost into barren blue, moment annoyed
Getting into thick crowd broadens the void
So sitting alone with dark Pink Floyd

A solitary mind on a desolate road
A solitary pen to a full blank page
A lonely heart bearing hollowness loud
A bird of forest locked in a cage
In a vase of flowers despair and rage
The ship gets no ground for anchorage

Helpless shadow of chin on knee
Lonely lonely and mere lonely
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July 23, 2016
Loneliness Contest

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Date: 8/9/2016 1:18:00 PM
Idealistic thoughts have been wonderfully written. Well done.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/9/2016 8:19:00 PM
Thank you ....
Date: 8/2/2016 8:32:00 AM
This is such a beauty of a poem:) Great use of metaphors:) A fave and a #7:)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/9/2016 8:20:00 PM
Thank you .....
Date: 7/28/2016 1:53:00 AM
Your blank Page is full of imagery and kindness, I wonder how magnificent your full page will be....
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/29/2016 1:33:00 AM
I'll be waiting....
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/28/2016 5:31:00 AM
Interesting observation ... it may be just the reverse too, absolutely dark , and these colours to compensate ... thank you ...
Date: 7/24/2016 5:15:00 PM
Probir, congratulations on your podium win for your poem in the 'loneliness' contest'! Sandra
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/25/2016 12:28:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 7/23/2016 11:53:00 PM
Congratulations Probir on the placement of the contest
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/24/2016 4:02:00 AM
Thank you so much ...
Date: 7/23/2016 2:43:00 AM
How could one feel lonely when verses like these fill the heart my frien, Probir? Excellen. Good luck.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/23/2016 6:06:00 AM
Thank you ... regards ...

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