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there are so many things i want to tell you i'm sorry for saying i'm sorry with teary eyes and raged breath i want you to know that i regret walking away, i bet you are much more happy now and if you'd let me write a poetry of you and me you will only see blanks that only both of us can fathom

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John Monteblanco

Date: 12/25/2014 1:10:00 PM

Your poetry is so beautiful

Whispering Plants
Date: 12/25/2014 8:24:00 PM

not as beautiful as yours I must say. :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/8/2014 2:40:00 PM

Welcome to poetrysoup!Sometimes We think someone is better off without us but in reality He She is not..A sad but beautiful poem.

Whispering Plants
Date: 12/8/2014 8:45:00 PM

thank you ma'm, I wish you are truly right about that, have a nice day.

Darlene Gifford

Date: 12/8/2014 12:06:00 PM

Why not share your heart with him as you've done with us. You think he's happier now, but you'll never know unless you share your feelings. I pray things will work out for the two f you. But only God know what's best, to move on or to dwell on the past. Blessings, Darlene

Whispering Plants
Date: 12/8/2014 8:51:00 PM

I have tried everything to tell him how sorry I was but it seems like he despises me, I don't know what to do, I am still naive on these things, I wish I was as matured as you. Thank you ma'm, likewise.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/8/2014 11:44:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Whispering Plants - I choose your first great, touching and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Whispering Plants
Date: 12/8/2014 8:59:00 PM

Oh how nice of you ma'm. I am very glad to know that I am already a part of a family, this makes me happy. I will try my best to continue on making poems.