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there are so many things
i want to tell you
i'm sorry for saying i'm sorry with teary eyes
and raged breath
i want you to know that i regret
walking away, i bet
you are much more happy now
and if you'd let me write
a poetry of you and me
you will only see blanks
that only both of us
can fathom
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Monteblanco Avatar
December 25, 2014 at 1:10 PM
Your poetry is so beautiful
Plants Avatar
December 25, 2014 at 8:24 PM
not as beautiful as yours I must say. :)
Chircop Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 2:40 PM
Welcome to poetrysoup!Sometimes We think someone is better off without us but in reality He She is not..A sad but beautiful poem.
Plants Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 8:45 PM
thank you ma'm, I wish you are truly right about that, have a nice day.
Gifford Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 12:06 PM
Why not share your heart with him as you've done with us. You think he's happier now, but you'll never know unless you share your feelings. I pray things will work out for the two f you. But only God know what's best, to move on or to dwell on the past. Blessings, Darlene
Plants Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 8:51 PM
I have tried everything to tell him how sorry I was but it seems like he despises me, I don't know what to do, I am still naive on these things, I wish I was as matured as you. Thank you ma'm, likewise.
Andresen Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 11:44 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Whispering Plants - I choose your first great, touching and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Plants Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 8:59 PM
Oh how nice of you ma'm. I am very glad to know that I am already a part of a family, this makes me happy. I will try my best to continue on making poems.
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