Jessica Arteaga Poet Rhyme

Blame It On the Spill

Oh mommy, mommy!
I have fallen and my head feels ill.
O darling baby, blame it on the spill.

Oh mommy, mommy!
I dropped my milk, now I can't feel chilled.
O darling baby, blame it on the spill.

Oh mommy, mommy!
The bottle top popped and spewed my pills.
O darling baby, blame it on the spill.

Oh mommy, mommy!
The beach is black and the fish have no will!
O darling baby, blame it on the spill...

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Poet Destroyer A September 2, 2010 at 3:22 PM this is a good one, liked this one the flow of it was awesome, congrats on the feature..P.D.

Audrey Haick August 30, 2010 at 5:10 PM Congratulations on your poem being featured this week on Soup, Jessica. Love, Audrey

Jayne Eggins August 30, 2010 at 8:52 AM Its such a tragedy and you paint a dark picture of whats happening over there congratulations on bein featured this week love Jayne

Carol Sunshine Brown August 30, 2010 at 6:30 AM Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week here at PoetrySoup Jessica. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 29, 2010 at 2:13 PM Congrats Jessica on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all ...with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown August 16, 2010 at 6:05 AM Congratulations to you Jessica on your win in Team PoetrySoup's contest "Gulf Oil Spill". Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 15, 2010 at 2:59 PM Congrats Jessica on your winning poem in the Gulf Oil Spill contest with this brilliant write.. enjoy another sweet victory this happy Sunday..with luv..

Jimmy Anderson July 4, 2010 at 2:15 PM Good luck in the contest, Jessica. Poem got lost in the mail Audrey' going to post it real soon. Thanks for the collab, my friend. Love, hugs, Jimmy

Michael Gelb July 2, 2010 at 3:34 PM I don't understand the "form" Very good I liked your poem. I only started writing poems since my wife died in 2009 I can relate to rhyming poems better than others. As you can tell from my poems. A lot of poems I don’t understand and I would hate to give a wrong comment. I want my poems to honor my wife long after I’m gone. Thank you

Gert W. Knop June 29, 2010 at 6:41 AM So well penned about that tragedy, Jessica! And the catastrophecontinues!!! Thank you for your kind comment on "Butterflies" and keep your pen flowing!:)..Gert

Carrie Richards June 25, 2010 at 7:38 AM The sound of the future.....this tragic song! :(