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Written on April 8, 2024

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A man can fail many times, but he isn't a failure until he begins to blame somebody else. John Burroughs bursts of anger once ruined me, my hopes and dreams, fear and doubt stole, leaving pain as deep as the sea, blame the shadows shrouding my soul. pride, the pleasure of vain conceit, ruined the truth that did console, more smugness than love could defeat, blame the shadows shrouding my soul. ego preyed on my soft yearnings, dimming the light that made me whole, masking warmth with lavish earnings, blame the shadows shrouding my soul. tempting me were life’s possessions, felt like greed had taken control, selfishness brought bleak impressions, blame the shadows shrouding my soul. still, I had only me to blame, fighting my pride, knowing my goal, when I failed, feeling so much shame, blame the shadows shrouding my soul.

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Date: 4/11/2024 8:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in this contest. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 4/8/2024 7:27:00 PM
Burst of anger, pride, ego, life's possessions, and blaming yourself. There is some powerful food for thought in this little gem of yours.
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Date: 4/8/2024 8:34:00 AM
Your poem is a poignant exploration of the human condition, offering insight into the complexities of self-awareness, accountability, and personal growth. It encourages readers to confront their own shadows and take responsibility for their actions, with the understanding that true healing and redemption come from within.
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Date: 4/8/2024 6:22:00 AM
Regina, your poem is a beautiful introspection and wisdom. Each stanza delves into the depths of human struggle, exploring themes of pride, ego, and selfishness with eloquence and insight. I loved the repetition of "blame the shadows shrouding my soul," reinforcing personal accountability's central message and recognizing that actual failure lies in deflecting responsibility onto others. This is a wonderful reflection on the complexities of the human experience. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 4/8/2024 5:38:00 AM
powerful poem, succinct rhyme scheme, exquisite imagery...your poem has it all including wisdom. Love 'blame the shadows shrouding my soul.' Fabulous contest entry! Your poem resonates with me. Faving...best wishes in the contest, hugs and blessings, Sara
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Date: 4/8/2024 2:22:00 AM
- Admitting your own mistakes can be painful... a lovely poem, Gina - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 4/8/2024 1:30:00 AM
Blame can be the result of something that went wrong. But as your quote expresses its wisdom, never blame others. Your character is strong, I know.
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