Blades

blades of grass rip
passed the hunters gun they slip….
fifteen in the clip
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 7:22 AM
OH, this is really nice! You can imagine the picture without being told all the details!
Song Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 7:07 AM
Excellent haiku with crispy words!
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