Blackout

dark tremors do take one to unlighted places,
what triggers this loss of our hold on the paces?
cold scared and alone in reality unknown, 
yet still footprints i leave in a world of my own
drenched, shaking the chill off from journeys in stoned
waking dreams shatter faces of villains we know
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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December 25, 2017 at 6:37 AM
Great first post Sarah, instead of I do not know, you can call this one rhyme if you wish.. Welcome to poetry soup..
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