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Blackest Rose

senses flee a body still clouds of grey destroy this life child unknown its mother slain a dying oath of lasting pain feet pause to view the light where feelings awaken beyond sight an accidental touch doth break the keep for undying love my blackest rose

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/20/2012 11:01:00 PM
Vividly portrayed Ralph! Grey clouds -that which spell doom. It's unfortunate how many children grow up without knowing where they came from. Well written poem!
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Date: 9/29/2012 7:07:00 AM
clear vivid picture, i liked the poem.
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Date: 9/19/2012 2:18:00 PM
This one had good flow to it...Enjoyed reading it this afternoon..It has a feeling to sadness to it with the mother being slain while pregnant..Reminds me of that Peterson who killed his wife while she was pregnant..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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