Blackbirds

On Halloween morning they came,
  cawing and screeching in the trees.
A thousand or more noisy blackbirds
  flew in a group of one hundred four or more
  from yard to yard they raid as a clustered flight.

The sky grew thick and black with wings
   and undulating shrillness dark as night.
A sudden snap or some foreign, unkown noise
   forced them high up into the sky 
   and into the trees with their shrieking sounds.

The familiar little birds, the wrens, sparrows, doves
   all hide in low bushes hidden from up above.
As quiet comes, the blackbirds return again
   at first high in the oak they flock
   dancing on the branches, shaking all the leaves.

Then it appears so obvious, they set the acorns free
   a nut of every size and every tree that once could be.
They return down to the ground
  with boisterous flapping wings and that cawing sound
  flocking down as one before the mid day sun.

From the sun's glowing rays upon their neck
  reflects an irridiscent light of blue as they peck.
Then in a flash they rise, up and away to the skies
  as quiet begins to return again
  and the little ones are at last set free in serach of seed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/27/2015 5:52:00 PM
DM congratulations on your win and a 7! I enjoyed this excellent Quintain with its amazing imagery! Well done, my friend! Pandita
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Date: 11/24/2015 2:16:00 PM
Beautiful observations of nature, Congratulations on your winning poem. SuZ
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Date: 11/24/2015 3:56:00 AM
Dm, Congratulations on your wonderful win. LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 11/22/2015 11:21:00 PM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning work DM!
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