Blackberrying

the time is right to pick 
but we must get there quick
before the birds arrive
or little larvae thrive 
or grows that fur of grey
that makes the fruit decay

must breach nature’s defence
let foraging commence
arched stems triggered to thrash
sharp thorns to rip the flesh
when fruit we try to claim
price of foraging game

caution we exercise
in grabbing precious prize
now we have our harvest
with berries at their best 
the time was right to pick 
but we had to work quick

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 8/11/2023 8:42:00 AM
Hi Tony, unfortunately blackberry is very expensive and rare where I live, I haven't tried it yet but I've had drinks that contain essence that tastes like medicine.
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Date: 6/30/2023 11:28:00 AM
Hello Tony, I tried blackberries for the first time. I discovered I like them. I buy them now. I have them in oatmeal. I do not add sugar I eat them the way they are. Enjoy yur day my friend. /Darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/3/2023 10:33:00 AM
Hello Tony, What are the bilberries like? What color are they? Well may to some people the gooseberries need sugar for some people. i have the blackberries just the way they are. I like the taste of them. So I would like the goose berries to. I would eat them without sugar. Enjoy your day my friend./Dar;ene/
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Tony Hargreaves
Date: 7/3/2023 7:54:00 AM
Many thanks. Pleased you enjoyed this. We used to pick lots of berries and eat as fresh. Blackberries, raspberries, bilberries. Forget the gooseberries - they need sugar. Tony
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