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Black Widow

Lust faking
Widow in making
Breath taking

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/7/2014 1:20:00 AM
What a beautiful write - excellent haiku! Pandita
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Date: 2/17/2012 4:31:00 PM
Yah, I think they bite their hubby's; kiss of death I think they call it! How are you luv, You must lead a busy life as there isn't musch new from you but I like to visit anyhow! :)
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Date: 11/19/2011 10:03:00 AM
Interesting, haiku in rhyme? couldn't ask for more.
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Date: 11/4/2011 3:34:00 PM
Is this a haiku? I don't dance with form poetry enough! Whatever this is tho', It struck me. I like your flow.
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Date: 11/2/2011 2:59:00 PM
Thanks for reading my stuff Mr. Effendi. I can't find one of your poems I haven't commented on. Sending love. daver
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Date: 10/29/2011 6:40:00 PM
An awesome Haiku. You have also rhymed it which makes it doubly enchanting. I am glad I decided to read your poems today. I appreciate your comments on my Quatrain Loveless Life. I have already posted my reply. Please revisit the poem. -Mohammad
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Date: 10/28/2011 9:48:00 PM
Awesome write! They are very interesting creatures. Always, Laura
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Date: 10/28/2011 11:36:00 AM
They do eat their mates don't they. sometimes a female preoccupatio. How are you my dear Hussain, I am always around, many times over. Hugs to you :)
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Date: 10/25/2011 4:48:00 PM
beware the spider's web Hussain.. nicely expressed with rhyme and makes one think before taking the leap of luv ..luv...
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Date: 10/23/2011 2:59:00 PM
It takes me paragraphs to say less than than you can in 7 thought-provoking words. I never thought "Breath taking" could have such a multi-faceted meaning but you've given the reader plenty to think about here. Nicely done and thanks for your comments concerning 'Thoughts are No Less Things." You're truly a good man Hussain. Thanks again.
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Date: 10/22/2011 9:51:00 PM
Ah, the fangs are poised and have done the damage. Doesn't take much to fire the mind but you do it well with so few words Hussain. Great soup is back up!
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Date: 10/21/2011 7:10:00 PM
Hello, MHE.. stopping by once more today.. I can think of two kinds of widows... hehehheh! love it... and my mind can have an image of both widows taking and faking lust... enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 10/21/2011 3:26:00 PM
I read Sara's comment. You learn something new every day. Enjoyed. Love, daver
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Date: 10/21/2011 1:32:00 PM
Good one..Got a chuckle..Those females are always extremely hungry after the male black widow comes calling and he is a easy snack..I am glad that I chose this one to read today...Your kind review of my work was greatly appreciated...If you click on "About This Poem", I put pictures with them..Sara
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