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Black Walls

To be a great kid could light up my day but to live in black walls takes that away i sit there and stare as i cry a long tear for in my black walls my beating heart just falls if the wall had some light and it wasn't so tight than my black walls would leave out of sight my tears go away as here comes a ray shining on my face than my heart starts to race i think of the joy for which i may see i think of joy that will change inside me a black wall can sometimes mean alot but i didn't have to sit there and rot i always had light in my mind and i was just a little bit blind for my family was there and i didn't even care i wanted to attracked them all but for that same reason i lived in BLACK WALLS

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/3/2011 4:22:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Brandi. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 6/2/2011 10:04:00 PM
a very deep deep,,poem Brandi... take care,..p.d.
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Date: 6/2/2011 8:58:00 PM
Wow, really deep poem. I enjoyed reading it.
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