Susan Gee Poet Rhyme

Black sheep

Black sheep of the family that is me,
middle sibling of three.
No -one talks visits or phones
Yet when they  all talk about me its nothing good they all just moan.
Guess im ment to be all alone.
Love,talk,and care i wished I recieved from you.
I wish things was different I really do
Us siblings once was close,
 but now drift so far away
I look back on the old good day
Why does everyone push me out
All I can do is cry and shout..
But on my own I will survive without a doubt.

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Beata Agustin July 17, 2026 at 11:55 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Team Poetrysoup July 14, 2026 at 6:54 PM This poem hits deep, the way you capture that quiet loneliness mixed with strength at the end feels super real and heartfelt. Being the "black sheep" is something that resonates with many people, Susan.