Black Nation

I see black people detaching themselves
From their roots
Burrying the truth that once lived
On the miners boots


I see the black youth leaving school
Thinking , damn we’re so cool 
Yet they die too soon.


I see red tears flowing out of old black women’s eyes,
They can’t do anything
 but cry.


I see black women evolving hate in this hopeless state
Trying to concentrate on giving love
But the one they get 
In return is fake.


I see old black women
 re-teaching their children how to love  and care
but everytime they try
its like they shoot themselves 
in the heart with a bullet of fear.


I see black people detaching themselves
From the truth......
Forgetting their ancestors roots.



By.  Chris Ngomane

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 2/26/2025 6:23:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed day.
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Date: 1/21/2016 11:48:00 PM
chris great poem. Enjoyed reading........ SKAT **
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Date: 5/3/2013 8:14:00 AM
This is a poem that seize my attention to up...am a black of great intent with this am fulfilled to be a black person now.good,great work....
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Date: 4/30/2013 6:13:00 AM
I see what you see! Come on,.....this is a great job!
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Chris Ngomane
Date: 4/30/2013 6:25:00 AM
Thanks hey. I'm glad we see the same thing and I'm looking forward to reading one of your poems
Date: 1/6/2013 9:52:00 PM
Chris, it has been a pleasure finding and reading the first poem you posted on the soup. by the way you have a very interesting point across... I'm just wondering why pull themselves from the truth...:-)...LINDA
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Chris Ngomane
Date: 1/7/2013 7:25:00 AM
Thank you. I appreciate your comment. They are actually deliberately detaching themselves from the from historical events that shaped them
Date: 1/5/2013 4:03:00 PM
Welcome to poetry Soup, an interesting write. Light & Love
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Chris Ngomane
Date: 1/7/2013 7:22:00 AM
Thank you Debbie for the warm hearted welcome.
Date: 12/21/2012 11:12:00 AM
Hi Chris, and welcome to the site look forward to reading some more of your work xx
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Chris Ngomane
Date: 1/7/2013 7:21:00 AM
Hi Mandy,thanks for the welcome and I'm also looking foward to reading some of your poems
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Chris Ngomane
Date: 1/7/2013 7:19:00 AM
Date: 12/20/2012 10:40:00 AM
A very warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you today Chris. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Chris Ngomane
Date: 1/7/2013 7:19:00 AM
Thank you so much Carol for the warm welcome.
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