Black Magic

All
   In black
   Dressed
   To kill
   Dracula,
   In guise
   Of
   Vampire  
   Sucking blood.
   In your struggle
   To survive,
   You must
   Hold 
   Out a
   Crucifix,
   Until
   The 
   Morning 
   Light.

   6/ 30/ 2015.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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July 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
George, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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July 24, 2015 at 12:35 PM
Hi LINDA, thankyou for kind thoughts ,i appreciate them so much. Cheers. George.
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July 20, 2015 at 4:20 PM
The Waltz has danced in rhythm and won!!! Way to go!! Congrats
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July 21, 2015 at 8:56 AM
Thanks Sara, for your nice comment on my Dracula poem. Cheers. George.
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July 20, 2015 at 3:48 PM
I like the fun way you did your piece. Congrats in the contest.,
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July 21, 2015 at 9:19 AM
Hi Andrea, i did as you suggested so i must thankyou for your excellent advice once again. Also for your kind comment on the poem. Cheers. George.
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July 19, 2015 at 3:26 PM
GEORGE, Congrats on your Waltzing with Color win. Love SKAT
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July 21, 2015 at 9:11 AM
Hi SKAT, thanks for your continued support i very much appreciate you doing so. My kindest regards to you. George.
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July 19, 2015 at 1:27 PM
Congratulations, George, on your win! I enjoyed your take on the theme! Love the "dark" imagery! Warmest regards. Pandita
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July 21, 2015 at 9:06 AM
Hi Pandita, i wrote this poem overlooking the very spot where Dracula in his coffin was washed ashore in Bram Stokers novel. Is that dark enough for you because it is the truth. I'm so glad that you enjoyed the poem. Cheers. George.
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July 19, 2015 at 5:23 AM
Love your take on the theme - congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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July 21, 2015 at 8:44 AM
Hi jan, thankyou for being patient i hope that the systems error has been eradicated now. I very much appreciate your comments on my effort. Cheers. George.
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July 21, 2015 at 8:35 AM
Hi Jan,
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July 19, 2015 at 12:07 AM
Congrats on your win George!
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July 21, 2015 at 8:59 AM
Thankyou Lee, i appreciate you sending me your congratulations. Regards. George.
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July 18, 2015 at 11:59 PM
I've always been fascinated with vampires. George, you did a great job of telling Dracula's story in such a rigid form. Congrats on your placement and thank you for participating in my contest! Love, Kim
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July 21, 2015 at 8:53 AM
Hi Kim, i was inspired by my recent stay at Whitby where Bram Stoker visited and wrote his epic Dracula.Thankyou for your kind comments on my poem. Cheers. George.
A  Avatar
July 1, 2015 at 12:28 AM
awesome verse
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July 14, 2015 at 3:12 PM
Hi SKAT, thankyou for visiting my poetry once again, with your most welcome comment. Brilliant. George
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June 30, 2015 at 2:48 PM
this almost looks like that new wave form of poetry. If you made a few adjustments you could enter it in the color contest!!
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July 14, 2015 at 3:33 PM
Hello again Andrea, i must thankyou once again for offering your most welcome advice. I really do appreciate your helping hand. Cheers George.
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