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Black Hole of Despair

Sometimes life can get so deep You feel like ti will seep More troubles out of the ground That pile up and bring you down I've had bad days that's been conquered But there is one you have conjured That has caused a cold black hole That I can not walk or crawl Over cause it sucked me down Into your life and now I'm bound To regret each passing moment Of days and nights you have stolen Realizing now I must Have had all the faith and trust Sucked out of me more each time I fell for your stupid liens Now I'm left with no desire To have someone start a fire In my soul, life, even heart There is nothing that I want To relive over again I am giving up on men And all the pain they create Knowing it is much too late To pull out of this dark hole That has taken quite a toll On every piece and aspect Of romance there's nothing left I will just surrender to This hell you have put me through

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/27/2014 7:44:00 PM
surrendering to hell. NEVER, my friend. well, this makes a good poem for despair, sweetie. I sure hope it is not about you though!!!
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Date: 4/27/2014 11:19:00 AM
Good write don't despair declare.... Hugs... Gina
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Date: 4/24/2014 3:08:00 PM
awesome but very sad write here, my friend. I hope it's just fiction x
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Date: 4/22/2014 7:56:00 AM
Amazing and sad all the same...how come no one commented here? I guess im the 1st lol. terrific write.
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