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Black Hole

In this black hole I fall deeper and deeper throw me back i'm no keeper I'm down so deep No one can even hear me weep Down here dreaming of that light to start gleaming How did I get here my mind is not clear I must get out of this black hole and never fall again This battle I must win

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/25/2012 10:17:00 AM
good poem! keep strong. you can do anything through christ who stregthens you. keep writing, its a good way to vent rejoice and praise!
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Date: 6/18/2012 1:21:00 PM
Terrible terrible place to be. Feelings of deserved worthlessness leave a sticky residue whether even when we overcome the battle... great way of putting this feeling, dear Brittney <3
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Date: 6/18/2012 5:57:00 AM
This is lovely. Weldone ^.^
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