Notes About The Poem

11/24/25

Bite Size No. 129

 

Contest by Line Gauthier 

Black hole

     My black hole love is aggressive
     By nature I am possessive
     May be, I’m not that impressive.

    My black hole love is permanent 
    To capture you, I'm not impatient,
     but to confine you on commitment.
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Godwin Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 4:45 PM
I came back to revise my comments; you don't need to be scared every time you see one of your own pages. I sure regret that happened. I will leave you with this truth: Your poem definitely stirred my imagination, and I love it when that happens!!!
Dutta Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 8:21 PM
I have arachnophobia. Don’t tell me about spider. I’m very much scared. Have Good Days. Blessings.
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