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Black Friday

I bought you a gift, Black Friday cheap I hoped you would like it and want to keep My credit card quaked and shook in my hand I spent much more than I had planned Black Friday gripped me, bargains galore I saw the glitter, glistening and spent some more The gold so yellow, Black Friday blond, amber Will drape with pride on your delicate camber. Black Friday arrived, a wooden gift box hidden Inside the thinnest chain your heart may be broken The diamonds larger on the screen, but tiny reality The gold a wafer, the emeralds pale lacking vitality Black Friday lied and Black Friday cheated My cards are naked, my accounts are depleted I dashed in the morning through the showers And hid Black Friday, with a bunch of flowers. David Cox 19/02/23

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 2/27/2023 1:17:00 PM
Your "Black Friday" was so cute/true. I don't do that day any more. Have a wonderful day...................
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Dave Cox
Date: 2/27/2023 2:02:00 PM
Paula, thank you. I hate how they know they are lying and still con people into buying their goods. I hate deceit and hate black Friday. Love fellow poets though and people with talent. Dave
Date: 2/22/2023 4:12:00 PM
a lovely poem that gave me a big smile!
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Aysha Nuwas
Date: 2/22/2023 5:03:00 PM
So do I, however I do love flowers!! :)
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Dave Cox
Date: 2/22/2023 4:25:00 PM
Thank you Ayesha. Personally I hate the con called black Friday. I am glad I brought a smile to your face. Dave

Book: Shattered Sighs