Black Dress

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Obliteration-destruction

Raiment-clothing

Demise-a person death

The Black Dress is Hanged in the Closet as symbol Of the date that never happened Until a day the raiment was wore for burial Of dreams obliteration and untimely demise of someone who escaped from life 3-5-2016

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Len Gasun

Date: 3/6/2016 8:14:00 AM

Black dresses sometimes make a person look slimmer, but they're really symbols of mourning and sorrow. So, sometimes, I avoid wearing them though I really like to when weight is gained. A very beautiful poem my dear friend, Nayda. I love it Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for appreciating my poem in your contest. Sorry, came from hospital so just came to thank you now. TYSM and God bless! love lots and hugs, GL

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/6/2016 10:34:00 AM

Thank you Galeo for your feedback and for visiting my poem. Wishing you a prompt improvement in your health