Linda-Marie Sweetheart Poet Rhyme

Black Diamond Night

  "Black Diamond Night"

an eerie essence embraces a haunting mist
on a black diamond night as illusions unfold
deep ebony sky infiltrates lovers kiss
excitement permeates viewing an orb of moongold

a sequined box reveals
an onyx stone conceals

carats tempting eyes
engagement ring surprise.


the mystic dazzle beckons shards of dusk twilight
the tender moment magnifies the fever of lovers glow
immersed in ecstasy at chiming of midnight
the diamond dust ensconces dreams  of radiant fond flow

blackness transcends to white
dark night is sheer delight

proposal beneath sequined passionry
black diamond dances on in finger fashionry.


*For Nathan's Contest.
*Written by:  Linda-Marie The "Sweetheart" of P.S.
*August 15, 2012

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Skat A March 13, 2014 at 2:20 AM I love this one so much ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~

Carol Sunshine Brown September 5, 2012 at 6:17 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nathan's "Black Diamond Night" contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 2, 2012 at 6:58 PM WON 3RD PLACE ... THANKXXX

Sara Kendrick September 2, 2012 at 1:08 PM Great winning work..Enjoyed reading this afternon...Congrats..Sara

Robert Johnson September 2, 2012 at 1:05 PM Moongold in a black hole bestills a fluttered heart. When love shines in dark pines forever gets its start. A blank page of graphite gray begins the end of time. Congrats on your great poem of gentle loving rhyme.

Poet Destroyer A September 1, 2012 at 12:20 PM Aweee Nice Linda my sweet BFF , finally i'm reading my favorite contest winner list.. congrats in Nathan's super awesome "Black Diamonds Night" contest... have a nice day~ Always & Forever ;-) PD

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 1, 2012 at 6:32 AM Congratulations Linda Marie on a fine win xx

Joann Grisetti August 31, 2012 at 12:57 PM A romantic winner - congratulations.

Jack Horne August 16, 2012 at 2:04 PM beautiful write indeed, Linda-Marie

Poet Destroyer A August 15, 2012 at 10:31 PM Hello, Linda my bff..... Nathan will love this..i sure did... good luck in the contest....love it..:-) Thank you for sharing * Goodnight~ PD

Andrea Dietrich August 15, 2012 at 8:19 PM I bet you have a black diamond from reading this!! GREAT way to do this contest theme, Linda. So descriptive. Sorry you are doing so poorly. What all does Ron do to help you? I hope you get better and better.

Russell Sivey August 15, 2012 at 4:54 PM Linda-Marie, for my contest you may write less than 6 lines if you wish to do so. I did say 6 lines OR less. Thanks for the inquiry my friend.

Russell Sivey August 15, 2012 at 4:27 PM Wow, what a beautiful piece here Linda-Marie, simply a very beautiful piece! I love how you integrated the Black Diamond Night into this poem...a great engagement ring, gorgeous! What a lovely tale this one is my friend! I love it, Great Work!!

Bukang Liwayway August 15, 2012 at 10:54 AM excellent poem my friend..good luck to the contest.... **Mary**

Cory Long August 15, 2012 at 10:20 AM This is a wonderful write my friend.. I am doing ok.. getting ready to tackle another semester... I pray for a speedy recovery for I miss you.. Good luck in the contest :) cory

David Williams August 15, 2012 at 10:15 AM Linda-Marie now I love this journey a sure winner,..David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 15, 2012 at 9:52 AM black diamonds are very exquisite as engagement rings.. and black niughts are hauntng to propose under.. so a lovers delight.. poets.. enjoy .. thankxx for all your sweet comments too.. I am doing better now..