Black Cloud

a black cloud hangs low
blocking the sun from my sky
a heart that still mourns
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Owens Avatar
November 28, 2009 at 8:05 PM
Very nice Haiku...Enjoyed...Marty
Kendrick Avatar
November 28, 2009 at 3:48 PM
Nicely done metaphoric language used here in this Haiku. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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