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black cloud

a black cloud hangs low blocking the sun from my sky a heart that still mourns

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/28/2009 8:05:00 PM
Very nice Haiku...Enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 11/28/2009 3:48:00 PM
Nicely done metaphoric language used here in this Haiku. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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