Black Cat With Two Laser Guns

night mare of two eyes
                                                black cat with two laser guns
                                                      pointing to the rats
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Davis Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 10:11 PM
Bl This is a creative and fun write. Gives the reader a chuckle and smile. Nice job Thanks for the nice comment on my wishes poem. FYI I am a girl, not a guy which you put in the comment. Just wanted inform you. No problem with the mistake.
Devnath  Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 3:19 AM
Thanks a lot for your nice comment. Sorry I didn't know that you are a girl. Though no matters, you are a poet friend indeed of mine. See you again. Loved always, bl
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October 16, 2013 at 4:09 AM
ha, ha, I love it....coolest haiku ever...luv Linda
Devnath  Avatar
October 16, 2013 at 2:16 PM
Many many thanks for your lovely coolest comment. Loved always, bl
Dietrich Avatar
October 15, 2013 at 5:53 PM
now this is GREAT, BL. MY black cat has laser eyes in the dark.
Devnath  Avatar
October 16, 2013 at 2:14 PM
Many thanks my friend for your lovely comment. Loved always, bl
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