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Black Carriage

Death's dark angel Black carriage drives Collecting lives Final rewards The carriage has Matching horses Pulling courses All of them black Death follows you All of your life Toil and strife Can't escape Him When it's their time They all object There's no respect Everyone dies Thanatos rides The Banshees cry Valkyries fly None of them care Mark Halliday Ride a Pathya Vat contest - Carriage theme 5 Aug 2014

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Date: 8/10/2014 9:35:00 PM
I really like this. Maybe Nette will want a shorter version! But it sure is a good poem.
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 8/12/2014 12:50:00 AM
She did, but decided not to change it.
Date: 8/9/2014 4:47:00 AM
thank you, mark.. SOUP MAIL!
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Date: 8/5/2014 12:09:00 PM
Great take on the theme Mark Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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