Black Beauty

Like a shadow against the twilight
 The dark beast gallops gracefully
 Majestic. Mighty. Magnificent. 
His long, flowing mane and whipping tail
 Like banners unfurled in the wind
 As he crosses the verdant field
 Ablaze with golden dandelions
 His shiny, silky, dusky coat shimmers
 Like a sable spectre in the setting sun
 His raw, rippling Muscles 
His power and strength
 And a pure unbridled force
 Demand respect. 
His trot like thunder
 Echoes in the distance.
 His neigh, like the crepuscular call 
Of a wild, magical beast
 Reminds us that he is a perfect, living portrait 
Of his ancestors, the wild mustangs.
 Tempest is his name,
 And a torrential tempest flows 
Through his pulsating, pumping veins.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Agustin Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 3:02 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 11:12 AM
ANGELA, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love ** SKAT **
Mansfield Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 1:50 PM
WOW... What a write Angela... I can almost feel the earth trembling and pounding as I read it... Such power... Thank you for posting. It is LOVELY... Thomas x
Johnston Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 1:54 PM
Thanks Thomas, Tempest is a real beauty, a raw kindness with an attitude.......
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