Black As Black

Wherever comes this strange, black chill
an overwhelming desire at the brink
inexplicably drawn and curious to sink
into the abyss of an unknown cavern?

Weighty and darker than the deepest sea
from blackest ink of a moonless night
its mystery surrounds, as I take flight
under solemn layers of silent secrets. 

Vision now vanishes, only touch to replace 
for there are no images to embrace 
nor sights to trace in this wretched place
a devilish black hole with an evil face. 

Black upon black looms ever on 
hemmed within slick and craggy walls
black bats shriek, the midnight hour calls
as I stumble into the black void of a forever fall.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Tellaferro Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 12:08 PM
love you use of black, you darker work is the best, but I biased, lol
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September 20, 2021 at 8:12 AM
Love the imagery, defiantly will be reading more of your work. 'Vision now vanishes, only touch to replace' tight, words speak volumes. AND Black is my fav (non) Color. LOL
Leiser Avatar
September 20, 2021 at 11:10 AM
Thank you, Jehiel. Glad you liked this one! :)
Theraven Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 9:58 PM
Laura, You reached so well in this Rhyme. Keep falling in 'solemn layers of silent secrets.' Very well written in silence fallen. -Richard
Leiser Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 10:25 PM
Thank you for commenting, Richard. I value your validation of my poetic efforts! :)
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