Notes About The Poem

Black and White : Image Number 1

The hands
are quick 
to pick
the keys
to play
the tune
"Chop Sticks"
No sharps
or flats
Go left
Go right
Move up
and down
white keys
to pound
to make
the sound
of glee!
The blacks
are bummed
they missed
the fun
to make
a song
so bright!


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For Contest: United Colours: Black and White
Sponsor: Silent One   Image #1 Piano Keys
3/7/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 11:19 AM
Carrie. Congratulations on your awesome Black and White united theme win. Love LINDA
Austin Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 4:26 PM
A little gem. I think I heard that Mozart wrote variations on chop sticks. A winner for sure. Love, daver
A. Sharma Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 2:36 AM
Brilliant take Carrie.. congrats on great win with these lovely words.
Tagore Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 9:42 PM
Congrats Carrie! Hugs, Bobby
Hicks Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 9:23 PM
Poor black keys, getting neglected ... gathering dust. Fun little poem, Carrie ... enjoyed, and congrats on your win!
Leiser Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 7:53 PM
Congrats on your win, Carrie :)
Raven Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 5:20 PM
Hi Carrie, Congratulations on your win in the contest.
Roper Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 5:17 PM
Congratulations on your Black & White contest win a 7 Hugs Eve
Roper Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 5:16 PM
Congratulations, Carrie, on your Black & White contest win a 7 Hugs Eve
Davey Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 3:45 PM
congratulations well done
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 1:24 PM
Yay! Very happy to see your entry rated high Carrie. Congratulations!
Callus Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 1:20 PM
You never fail to deliver the goods, Carrie! Creative take delivered in a flowing manner. Congratulations on a fine win!! ~ Regards // paul
Milliner Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 11:18 AM
Good one!! Congratulations, Carrie!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 11:25 PM
All little kids love learning how to play Chop Sticks Carrie...it took me right back to my youth as we always had a piano growing up. I adore your entry and I hope to see it high on the winner's list. #7. ; )
Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 3:29 PM
Cool take on the theme, Carrie. these are fun to read!
De La Luna Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 9:44 PM
I Love how this piece was woven, Carrie! It has rhythm which goes with the image, fun, and wit!
Leiser Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 11:11 PM
I like the humor in your creative write, Carrie :) Good luck in the contest!
Tagore Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 9:00 PM
Wonderfully penned, Carrie. Bonne Chance! ... Hugs, Bobby
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