Black and White Hornet

black and white hornet spies bug trapped in spider's web.... zap struggles freedom
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Maverick Avatar
September 10, 2012 at 1:52 PM
But what about the spider Sara?? see.." you've got me thinking here,,)
Babcock Avatar
September 8, 2012 at 4:18 PM
Our hornets and black and yellow or we call them yellow jackets. Nasty bugs that have a good bite. Enjoyed reading your haiku. Hope all is well with you. love phyl
Babcock Avatar
September 8, 2012 at 4:20 PM
should be are black and yellow
Devnath  Avatar
September 7, 2012 at 10:11 AM
Wonderful haiku of freedom, even related to human. Loved always, bl
Brown Avatar
September 7, 2012 at 5:53 AM
Another weekend is about to begin and I am enjoying reading such amazing and diverse poetry this morning. I am so pleased to see your writings posted here Sara. Hoping you have a happy sun filled weekend full of love, joy and inspiration. Love, Carol
Nutter Avatar
September 6, 2012 at 8:04 PM
The hunter becoming the hunted, nice.....
Sweetheart Avatar
September 6, 2012 at 7:07 PM
an impressive scene Sara and the age old struggle of survival of the fittest .. nice ..
Culverhouse Avatar
September 6, 2012 at 4:36 PM
yummy meal though. did you and dad settle the discussion on vacation?
Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2012 at 4:05 PM
LOVE this one. It's quite visual!!!
Horne Avatar
September 6, 2012 at 2:15 PM
enjoyed this clever haiku, my friend. I've never seen black and white hornets - we just get the yellow and brown ones, I think
Sivey Avatar
September 6, 2012 at 11:44 AM
What a clever idea for a poem my friend! I really enjoyed the trapped bug in the spiders web...what a terrible existence! I am glad that I read this poem today, it was such a joy to read...I really liked the way you put it together Sara! ZAP! Great Work!!
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