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Black and White Hornet

black and white hornet
spies bug trapped in spider's web....
zap struggles freedom

lifenaturehaiku

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Joe Maverick

Date: 9/10/2012 1:52:00 PM

But what about the spider Sara?? see.." you've got me thinking here,,)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/8/2012 4:18:00 PM

Our hornets and black and yellow or we call them yellow jackets. Nasty bugs that have a good bite. Enjoyed reading your haiku. Hope all is well with you. love phyl

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/8/2012 4:20:00 PM

should be are black and yellow

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/7/2012 10:11:00 AM

Wonderful haiku of freedom, even related to human. Loved always, bl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/7/2012 5:53:00 AM

Another weekend is about to begin and I am enjoying reading such amazing and diverse poetry this morning. I am so pleased to see your writings posted here Sara. Hoping you have a happy sun filled weekend full of love, joy and inspiration. Love, Carol

Anthony Nutter

Date: 9/6/2012 8:04:00 PM

The hunter becoming the hunted, nice.....

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/6/2012 7:07:00 PM

an impressive scene Sara and the age old struggle of survival of the fittest .. nice ..

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/6/2012 4:36:00 PM

yummy meal though. did you and dad settle the discussion on vacation?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2012 4:05:00 PM

LOVE this one. It's quite visual!!!

Jack Horne

Date: 9/6/2012 2:15:00 PM

enjoyed this clever haiku, my friend. I've never seen black and white hornets - we just get the yellow and brown ones, I think

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/6/2012 11:44:00 AM

What a clever idea for a poem my friend! I really enjoyed the trapped bug in the spiders web...what a terrible existence! I am glad that I read this poem today, it was such a joy to read...I really liked the way you put it together Sara! ZAP! Great Work!!

Black and White Hornet

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