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Black and White

on equal footing we face our horizon. . . be it high tide or low


Written march 14, 2016 for PD's (monoku #9) write what you SEE or FEEL - Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 7/15/2016 3:25:00 PM
This is awesome Andrea, Congratulations. Undisputed Truth you have got encoded in that single line which captures so much about life. Well Deserved top placement
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Date: 4/1/2016 7:18:00 AM
Beautiful metaphorical craftsmanship of words!!!! Congrats Andrea,for your top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 3/30/2016 2:07:00 PM
Pleased to be back with congratulations, Andrea...well done! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 3/30/2016 9:03:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your remarkable win. You never failed to write a jaw-dropping poem! You truly are praiseworthy! Keep up the good work and continue to enjoy the blessings of words and poetry. :) -HANS
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Date: 3/29/2016 3:05:00 PM
May your highs outweigh you lows dear Andrea. Excellent write and win. Hugs
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Date: 3/29/2016 9:33:00 AM
Powerful words and so few.
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Date: 3/29/2016 3:22:00 AM
Brilliant take Andrea.. congrats on big win!
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Date: 3/27/2016 11:22:00 PM
I like the "equal footing" . Congratulations on your wonderful win Andrea:)
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Date: 3/27/2016 10:00:00 PM
Love it, congratulations Andrea on the win...
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Date: 3/27/2016 5:24:00 PM
Congratulations. It's perfect. SuZ
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Date: 3/27/2016 12:53:00 PM
Hi Andrea, Nicelly done, very clever capturing of the whole image and mood--footing, horizon and tide--into one little line. Congrats on your win. Cheers, Brian
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Date: 3/27/2016 12:52:00 PM
A big congrats on your win my lovely friend with this excellent poem. Loved always, bl
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Date: 3/27/2016 11:49:00 AM
This one is great...Congrats on your win!
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Date: 3/27/2016 9:41:00 AM
Hi Andrea, Happy Easter, Congratulations on your win in the contest. I Love the way so few words can have more than one meaning and they sing. One line and it sings to me. An excellenbt write as usual Andrea. A defin ite seven and it floats so easily into my faves....MIKE.
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Date: 3/27/2016 8:01:00 AM
Congrats on this WIN, Andrea
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Date: 3/27/2016 5:56:00 AM
Love it!
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Date: 3/27/2016 4:33:00 AM
Superb win Andrea! Congratulations! ; )
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Date: 3/27/2016 4:28:00 AM
Excellent. Congrats to the top one....
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Date: 3/26/2016 11:52:00 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your awesome WIN. Thank you for supporting my one line verse contest. Stop by my latest blog "Do You See What I See? if you like." Happy Easter. Love LINDA
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Date: 3/17/2016 3:54:00 PM
Very clever one liner good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/16/2016 7:51:00 AM
I love the flow of this line! Nicely done!
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Date: 3/16/2016 12:41:00 AM
A great entry Andrea is this seeing or feeling?
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Date: 3/16/2016 12:09:00 AM
Great picture and poem Andrea.
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Date: 3/15/2016 11:21:00 PM
I really like your interpretation here in your well written, succinct poem, Andrea! Good luck in the contest:)
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Date: 3/15/2016 9:45:00 PM
Well said!!
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