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Black and White

on equal footing we face our horizon. . . be it high tide or low


Written march 14, 2016 for PD's (monoku #9) write what you SEE or FEEL - Poetry Contest
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Akinjute Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 3:25 PM
This is awesome Andrea, Congratulations. Undisputed Truth you have got encoded in that single line which captures so much about life. Well Deserved top placement
Kimathi Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 7:18 AM
Beautiful metaphorical craftsmanship of words!!!! Congrats Andrea,for your top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
Callus Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 2:07 PM
Pleased to be back with congratulations, Andrea...well done! ~ Regards // paul
Selfa Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 9:03 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your remarkable win. You never failed to write a jaw-dropping poem! You truly are praiseworthy! Keep up the good work and continue to enjoy the blessings of words and poetry. :) -HANS
Macfarlane Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 3:05 PM
May your highs outweigh you lows dear Andrea. Excellent write and win. Hugs
Walker Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 9:33 AM
Powerful words and so few.
A. Sharma Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 3:22 AM
Brilliant take Andrea.. congrats on big win!
Daniel Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 11:22 PM
I like the "equal footing" . Congratulations on your wonderful win Andrea:)
Smith Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 10:00 PM
Love it, congratulations Andrea on the win...
Delaney Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 5:24 PM
Congratulations. It's perfect. SuZ
Mcclain Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 12:53 PM
Hi Andrea, Nicelly done, very clever capturing of the whole image and mood--footing, horizon and tide--into one little line. Congrats on your win. Cheers, Brian
Devnath  Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 12:52 PM
A big congrats on your win my lovely friend with this excellent poem. Loved always, bl
May Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 11:49 AM
This one is great...Congrats on your win!
Raven Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 9:41 AM
Hi Andrea, Happy Easter, Congratulations on your win in the contest. I Love the way so few words can have more than one meaning and they sing. One line and it sings to me. An excellenbt write as usual Andrea. A defin ite seven and it floats so easily into my faves....MIKE.
Babu Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 8:01 AM
Congrats on this WIN, Andrea
Palli Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 5:56 AM
Love it!
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 4:33 AM
Superb win Andrea! Congratulations! ; )
Gupta Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 4:28 AM
Excellent. Congrats to the top one....
A   Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 11:52 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your awesome WIN. Thank you for supporting my one line verse contest. Stop by my latest blog "Do You See What I See? if you like." Happy Easter. Love LINDA
Allison Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 3:54 PM
Very clever one liner good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Heemstra Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 7:51 AM
I love the flow of this line! Nicely done!
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 12:41 AM
A great entry Andrea is this seeing or feeling?
Lamoureux Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 12:09 AM
Great picture and poem Andrea.
Leiser Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 11:21 PM
I really like your interpretation here in your well written, succinct poem, Andrea! Good luck in the contest:)
Vaso Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 9:45 PM
Well said!!
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