Black and White

Black satiny, ebony dashing, unbridling, entertaining formal tuxedo, athlete, wedding gown, chalk snowing, swaddling, sparkling cottony, sudsy White
Written April 29, 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kavanagh  Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 10:19 AM
Heya Milton you certainly got from black to white, quite seamlessly in fact, perfectly symmetrical too, impressive wording, word player, cheers David
Kavanagh  Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 2:07 PM
I might just do that the weekend
Hankins Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 12:23 PM
Thanks so much, David. Give 'er a whirl!
Lamoureux Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 6:22 AM
I am not that familiar with this form but I like what you have done here.;0)
Hankins Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 8:12 AM
Thanks, Richard, for your comment. Give it a try. It's like a word puzzle. Have a terrific weekend. I'm heading out for a vacation in Panama City, FL on Saturday, so I'm getting antsy.
May Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 4:19 AM
Very nicely penned Milton, best wishes
Hankins Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 8:11 AM
Thanks so much, Joseph. I appreciate your compliment. Best wishes to you.
Horsman Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 10:49 PM
Some only see the world in Black and White Milton, yet your imagery here is superb. Love the form and the poetry. Stay Safe.
Hankins Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 8:10 AM
Thanks so much, Harry. So true. Actually, this was one of the more difficult diamantes to write. Climate being what it is, I figured I'd get slammed, but I couldn't pass up the contrasts.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 10:05 PM
You are doing such an impressive job of going through the types of poetry and mastering them all! Wow! I knew this would happen once you got started, and now it has. Lovely!
Hankins Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 8:09 AM
I'm really not trying consciously to do that, Caren, but I do consult the "Type of Poetry" frequently and try to pick a form/format that fits what I want to write. I do enjoy wordplay and word games, so some of them appeal more to me than others. Thanks so much!
Romios Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 9:47 PM
You blow me away with your outstanding words, and imagery. I see you in a tuxedo....you remind my of my date when I was a debutante. He had to wear tails.)) how great he looked. Great diamanté and not in a contest? Wow~ that doubles my enjoyment of it. Merci, Pangie xx
Hankins Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 9:50 PM
Thanks, Pangi. Actually, I prefer the poems I do NOT write for contests. I have more free rein on where the poem is going, etc. Thanks so much for your read and your kind, encouraging words. They mean so much to me.
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