Black and Red All Over

She’d enunciate with fingers.
Deft language in deafness lingers
on blackboard.

Darkening reflection of smoke,
Wing’d knowledge of their names, baroque.
Bright blackbirds

smack against the Springtime phantoms.
Where’s the curious young bantams?
Forc’d blackout!

Uninspired for many days past,
a latent snack of sun-harrass’d
blackberries.

Must teens wait til they’re twenty-one?
The shut-ins, in digitized stun,
play blackjack?

5/3/2020
Compounding The Verse Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Joseph May
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Marcum Wong Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 1:35 PM
Wow Kim! I really loved your unique entry. Even your title amazes! A brilliant example of this challenging form my friend. Congratulations on your win! xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 3:51 PM
Thank you, my friend!
May Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 9:04 PM
Very nicely penned Kim, Congrats on your win..
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 9:20 PM
Thank you, Joseph!
Mishra Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 6:38 PM
Wow! What a creative portrayal of imagery with the colours and the complete journey through your poem is a mysterious ride of depths. Congratulations on your win Kim :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 6:44 PM
Thank you, Aditi!
Krutsinger Avatar
May 4, 2020 at 6:27 AM
This part by itself was sheer absolute gorgeous poetry."Uninspired for many days past, a latent snack of sun-harrass’d blackberries."
Rodrigues Avatar
May 4, 2020 at 7:46 AM
Thank you, my friend! xx
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