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Black Angus Replacement Heifers (Bred Commercials)

Black

Three black angus cows knee-deep in cool lake

Two on bank look longingly 

Egret stands on one's back

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Kim Rodrigues

September 21, 2021 at 4:59 AM

Nice

Sara Kendrick

September 21, 2021 at 5:19 AM

Kim, Thank you. Sara

Richard Lamoureux

September 20, 2021 at 7:14 AM

Great imagery. Simple and perfect. Hugs Rick.

Sara Kendrick

September 20, 2021 at 7:31 AM

Richard, Your supportive and kind review of my work reassures me that I am on the right path in my writing. Sara

Brian Strand

September 20, 2021 at 1:53 AM

Such a vivid colour Sara,so many shades,I love drawing in it,as its so versatile

Sara Kendrick

September 20, 2021 at 4:14 AM

Thank you, Brian. Our son-in-law is an artist as is our daughter Doris. Our son-in-law likes to use charcoal. I appreciate the visit and the sharing of yourself in the review. Sara

Anitha Jayasankar

September 19, 2021 at 6:55 AM

Wow reading another Kimo form of yours dear Sara... such a beautiful imagery created with an awesome picture... I have to try to write more in this form... I hope you are doing well... Love and respect... ~ Ani

Sara Kendrick

September 19, 2021 at 8:10 AM

Anitha, I am sure that you can do some excellent works using this form. Your visit is so supportive. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Jennifer Fenn

September 18, 2021 at 8:55 PM

Good kimo Sara! I will have to try that sometime.

Sara Kendrick

September 19, 2021 at 3:24 AM

Jennifer, I will look forward to reading your Kimo. Your visit is so affirming. Sara

Judy Ball

September 18, 2021 at 11:30 AM

Love seeing cattle or horses in the fields. Lovely God Bless, JB

Sara Kendrick

September 19, 2021 at 3:20 AM

Judy, You must be from the country to enjoy seeing animals like that but I guess a city dweller could enjoy it as well. Your visits to my page are reassuring to me. Sara

Alexis Y.

September 18, 2021 at 6:10 AM

Hi Sara, You described the picture very well. Great job:-) Alexis

Sara Kendrick

September 19, 2021 at 3:12 AM

Your praise, Alexis, is always supportive. Thanks..Sara

Tom Cunningham

September 17, 2021 at 7:46 AM

Love the image of nature Sara. Enjoy your weekend. Tom

Sara Kendrick

September 17, 2021 at 8:07 AM

Tom, Thank you for the wish for a good weekend. I hope you have a great one as well. Sara

Gary Radice

September 17, 2021 at 7:06 AM

Pieces of life's jigsaw that fit together perfectly - like the lines in your kimo Sara :) (I had to look the word 'kimo' up - an Israeli version of a Haiku) Cheers - Gary

Sara Kendrick

September 17, 2021 at 7:58 AM

Gary, Yes, I had to look it up also. I can learn but sometimes it doesn't stay with me like years ago. I appreciate your visit. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

September 17, 2021 at 6:16 AM

Lovely poem. I just can picture it. Well done.

Sara Kendrick

September 17, 2021 at 7:57 AM

Victor, Yes, an easy picture to see. Your visit has found a place in my heart. Sara

Delice Arleen Skelly

September 17, 2021 at 3:37 AM

I can just imagine this scene, funny how animals interact with one another..Well done...Delice

Sara Kendrick

September 17, 2021 at 5:26 AM

Yes, Delice. I agree it is wonderful how they can work together to help each other in some way. The egrets eat the insects that bother the cattle but also as the cows graze they stir up insects that the egrets enjoy. I know the great Creator was the one who designed the plan. Your visits are always delightful. Sara

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