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Black Angus Replacement Heifers (Bred Commercials)

Black

Three black angus cows knee-deep in cool lake

Two on bank look longingly 

Egret stands on one's back

americanaturekimo

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/21/2021 4:59:00 AM

Nice

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/21/2021 5:19:00 AM

Kim, Thank you. Sara

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/20/2021 7:14:00 AM

Great imagery. Simple and perfect. Hugs Rick.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/20/2021 7:31:00 AM

Richard, Your supportive and kind review of my work reassures me that I am on the right path in my writing. Sara

Brian Strand

Date: 9/20/2021 1:53:00 AM

Such a vivid colour Sara,so many shades,I love drawing in it,as its so versatile

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/20/2021 4:14:00 AM

Thank you, Brian. Our son-in-law is an artist as is our daughter Doris. Our son-in-law likes to use charcoal. I appreciate the visit and the sharing of yourself in the review. Sara

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 9/19/2021 6:55:00 AM

Wow reading another Kimo form of yours dear Sara... such a beautiful imagery created with an awesome picture... I have to try to write more in this form... I hope you are doing well... Love and respect... ~ Ani

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/19/2021 8:10:00 AM

Anitha, I am sure that you can do some excellent works using this form. Your visit is so supportive. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 9/18/2021 8:55:00 PM

Good kimo Sara! I will have to try that sometime.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/19/2021 3:24:00 AM

Jennifer, I will look forward to reading your Kimo. Your visit is so affirming. Sara

Judy Ball

Date: 9/18/2021 11:30:00 AM

Love seeing cattle or horses in the fields. Lovely God Bless, JB

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/19/2021 3:20:00 AM

Judy, You must be from the country to enjoy seeing animals like that but I guess a city dweller could enjoy it as well. Your visits to my page are reassuring to me. Sara

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/18/2021 6:10:00 AM

Hi Sara, You described the picture very well. Great job:-) Alexis

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/19/2021 3:12:00 AM

Your praise, Alexis, is always supportive. Thanks..Sara

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/17/2021 7:46:00 AM

Love the image of nature Sara. Enjoy your weekend. Tom

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/17/2021 8:07:00 AM

Tom, Thank you for the wish for a good weekend. I hope you have a great one as well. Sara

Gary Radice

Date: 9/17/2021 7:06:00 AM

Pieces of life's jigsaw that fit together perfectly - like the lines in your kimo Sara :) (I had to look the word 'kimo' up - an Israeli version of a Haiku) Cheers - Gary

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/17/2021 7:58:00 AM

Gary, Yes, I had to look it up also. I can learn but sometimes it doesn't stay with me like years ago. I appreciate your visit. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/17/2021 6:16:00 AM

Lovely poem. I just can picture it. Well done.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/17/2021 7:57:00 AM

Victor, Yes, an easy picture to see. Your visit has found a place in my heart. Sara

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 9/17/2021 3:37:00 AM

I can just imagine this scene, funny how animals interact with one another..Well done...Delice

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/17/2021 5:26:00 AM

Yes, Delice. I agree it is wonderful how they can work together to help each other in some way. The egrets eat the insects that bother the cattle but also as the cows graze they stir up insects that the egrets enjoy. I know the great Creator was the one who designed the plan. Your visits are always delightful. Sara

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