Bittersweet Jane

My mind is gone
Here on the couch
Day after day
Hour after hour
Nap after laughter
I am a vegetable

In this grey robe
My hair turns greasy
The phone's too far
But the meal never is
Oh, Jane
You are so bittersweet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 8, 2010 at 12:11 PM
I am so happy your poetry was amongst the poetry I am reading today Connie. May you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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