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Bittersweet

A love that lasts a summer, A song that last forever, A cry that will end in a short while, And yet the morning stays in denial.

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/7/2012 1:32:00 PM

An oldie but a goodie. Light & Love

Jessica K

Date: 5/24/2009 8:19:00 PM

Very beautiful chicka -Jessica

James Marshall Goff

Date: 5/20/2009 12:56:00 PM

visiting again my new fav!!!! your last line....personifying the morning... comparing its efforts to the summer-love a song that lasts forever(maybe good maybe sad! cool!!) and a brief-cry .....really incredible talent!!! Emily!!!! which poems of yours are your favorites??? Jim

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 4/22/2009 8:22:00 AM

Very nice. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. God bless you. Always, Dane

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 4/21/2009 8:18:00 AM

Congrats Emily on the featureing of "Bittersweet." Vince

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 4/21/2009 1:20:00 AM

Great write, great muse, congratulations on being featured, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/20/2009 4:36:00 PM

Congrats on your excellent featured write of the week! Love, Shar

David Smalling

Date: 4/20/2009 10:09:00 AM

Great flow of vision, congratulations on it being featured.

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/19/2009 9:47:00 PM

Emily, congrats on being featured this week...Raul

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 4/19/2009 6:03:00 PM

Powerful poem, A lot was said in just these few lines, very deep..Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week.Welcome to PoetrySoup, GB and Best Wishes, Always Tyesha

Date: 4/19/2009 1:58:00 PM

Interesting piece for reflection. Much said in just four lines. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Enjoy your honor. Karen

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 4/19/2009 1:16:00 PM

Emily, welcome to the soupland. Congratulations on your poem being featured. Mine is also featured this week. Keepon posting. Ernilando

Rhonda Hero Aka Hero-Wilson

Date: 4/19/2009 12:36:00 PM

GOOD!!! Love It!! Congradulations on being featuered..RKay

Michael Jordan

Date: 4/19/2009 10:07:00 AM

Emily - Loved this simplistic poem - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj

Julie Loveless

Date: 4/9/2009 8:25:00 AM

aww i love it emily!

Serenity D'Nae Montgomery

Date: 4/7/2009 8:21:00 AM

Wow this is like amazingly good!!!

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 4/1/2009 7:16:00 PM

Dear Emily,Welcome to the SOUP Hope YOU enjoy YOUR STAY with us You will meet many Great POETS This POEM "Bittersweet" is vivid and full of Imagery A summer LOVE so Great sad ending Superb Write ALWAYS...HG

Christian Head

Date: 3/31/2009 10:09:00 AM

very beautiful my friend