Bitter Fruit

bitter fruit 
cast from rotten trees 
bear no seeds

angsthaiku

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Jan Allison

March 24, 2019 at 7:08 PM

powerful haiku which is open to so many interpretations - sadly it makes me think of a family member:-( hugs Jan xx

Deb Radke

March 29, 2019 at 6:58 PM

Thank you, Jan, for the encouraging words. Yes, I, too, have a few relatives “rotting on the ground”.

Warren Doll

December 29, 2018 at 9:55 AM

Brilliant haiku, Deb. So deep-with many interpretations . A fav for me. Warmest wishes~ Warren

Deb Radke

March 29, 2019 at 6:54 PM

Thanks, Warren. You pay me a great compliment by saying this poem has many interpretations. Take care. Deb

Andrea Dietrich

December 21, 2018 at 7:54 PM

I always think of that sad song from long ago when I see the words bitter fruit. I like the format and flow of this.

Deb Radke

March 29, 2019 at 6:53 PM

Thanks so much Andrea. I’m glad this poem spoke to you.

Harry Horsman

December 7, 2018 at 3:35 PM

Wonderful, Haiku, Deb, i read into this so much,,,

Deb Radke

December 20, 2018 at 8:26 AM

Thanks, Harry. I appreciate your words of support. Deb

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