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Bitter blood

Barking, biting their own blood, battling, bleeding …breaking blessed bonds

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 7/12/2009 12:01:00 PM
Good use of alliteration for a rhythmic poem. Much for the reader to think about here. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 7/12/2009 8:38:00 AM
I love the urgency and energy you display, contained in this precise form! Adeleke, I adore your haiku! jim
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Date: 7/12/2009 2:22:00 AM
I like your Haiku. I am not sure but I believe your dog bit a family member. Sara
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Date: 6/29/2009 11:39:00 AM
I respect this poem Alot.Well Write=)
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