Bitter Blood

Barking, biting their own 
blood,
battling, bleeding
…breaking blessed bonds
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 12, 2009 at 12:01 PM
Good use of alliteration for a rhythmic poem. Much for the reader to think about here. Keep on writing! Karen
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July 12, 2009 at 8:38 AM
I love the urgency and energy you display, contained in this precise form! Adeleke, I adore your haiku! jim
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July 12, 2009 at 2:22 AM
I like your Haiku. I am not sure but I believe your dog bit a family member. Sara
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June 29, 2009 at 11:39 AM
I respect this poem Alot.Well Write=)
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