Bitter

Well I learnt how to be bitter,to live 
alongside a situation like a creepy ol 
critter ,,, To try and try and always 
fall,never get that nerve to stand 
tall....

Looking fate square in the face in 
chuckles of rage, I wonder when my 
mysterious life will turn its page,,,, 
knowing one might be wrong in their 
ways they befold, wanting nothing 
more than their hearts to be warm 
not so cold...

Looking at the present a huge task to 
feet, if only one could stay focused 
on the future he'd see it's stronger 
than week.,, shall I overcome this 
brutal beast I hold within,,,to walk 
ever so free inside a conscience of 
sin..........
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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September 16, 2026 at 7:03 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 11:57 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 7, 2016 at 11:09 PM
SEAN, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
Sergi Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 8:04 AM
enjoyed this one welcome
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November 23, 2013 at 6:23 PM
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