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Biting Mountain Air Haiku No 35

biting mountain air
baby lamb trails on the edge....
mint sauce with dinner





entry for Charles Henderson's strict Haiku 2 competition

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Debbie Guzzi

January 19, 2011 at 6:19 AM

LOL [ps Charlie said NO ...I had to take mine off too, this is a winner to me so, we must take off our ...for now;)] Light & Love

Sara Kendrick

January 8, 2011 at 4:39 PM

Very expressive and descriptive Haiku..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Good luck in the contest...Your presence at my work encouraged me.Sara

Eiken Laan

January 7, 2011 at 7:12 AM

Deirdre, this is magic, I love it. You have the killer last line, poor lamb. I am a veggie lol. Are you Irish? I am from Waterford originally but live in Wicklow and Germany at the moment. Home is Wicklow and Germany is work. I just posted a piece on a new Ireland, a true reflection of life today through the eyes of a beggar I saw. Thanks for your comment.

Andrea Dietrich

January 5, 2011 at 4:06 PM

no win? I fav it!

David Smalling

January 5, 2011 at 12:44 PM

Happy new year, and best of luck in the contest. Talented and funny ... you are.

Eamon Duffin

January 3, 2011 at 7:25 AM

Hi and Happy New Year. I can see that dinner. Once again your vision knows no bounds. I read the rules for this-- surprise after the cut-- Bloody hell! You got it in spades. Eamon

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 3, 2011 at 4:21 AM

What a way to start out my New Year reading such exceptional poetry. Thank you for starting the new year out with us sharing your wonderful poetry Deirdre. Love, Carol