Krish Radhakrishna Poet Verse

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Bite Size Tableau

in vast ocean blue,
soft light swim these two,
her length width of bite,
razor sharp great white,
she admires his charm,
knows will do no harm!

Written 26/03/2021
2nd placement
Tableau Poetry contest picture 1
6 lines, 5 syllables each line.
Joseph May sponsored

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Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2021 at 12:34 PM you got it right. She knew he would do no harm!! Congrats on your win. Krish Radhakrishna April 2, 2021 at 1:00 PM Thanks Andrea! I did not know at the time but from her body language guessed right! There are such wonderful people in the world!

Malabika Ray Choudhury April 1, 2021 at 11:35 AM Krish, Congratulations. Scary, and bravery!! Best wishes ~ Mala Krish Radhakrishna April 1, 2021 at 12:01 PM Thanks Mala!! Your two words sums that up so well! But oceanographers have to deal with it! I do not know the background of this picture, will be interesting to explore!

Eve Roper March 31, 2021 at 9:51 PM Great imagery, Krish, congratulation on you win. Have a blessed Easter. Hugs Eve Krish Radhakrishna March 31, 2021 at 10:47 PM Thanks Eve! You too, wishing a blessed Easter! My warm wishes! Krish

Kim Merryman March 31, 2021 at 3:14 PM I like your rhyme, Krish! I certainly wouldn't trust that shark! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M Krish Radhakrishna March 31, 2021 at 10:48 PM Kim Thanks! Some experts do get close and study these Tigers of the deep!

Sam Kauffman March 31, 2021 at 9:02 AM Congrats, kudos and high fives Krish! You turned what could be a very scary picture into a glimpse of a momentary relationship between the powerful and the fragile. I like it! Hope you are doing well. Krish Radhakrishna March 31, 2021 at 10:37 AM Thanks Sam! Yes, positive thinking and all that. there are people who risk their lives and study dangerous creatures so we can live safely! Hats off to them! God bless and keep writing your wonderful poems!

Joseph May March 31, 2021 at 5:29 AM Congrats on your win Krish, Very nicely done Krish Radhakrishna March 31, 2021 at 5:42 AM Thanks Joseph!! I wanted to paint a positive image of the Great white!

Kim Rodrigues March 26, 2021 at 3:45 PM Great bravery or stupidity! Krish Radhakrishna March 26, 2021 at 11:00 PM Knowledge is power, I think! Thanks Kim!:) I would not trust a beast like that!

Tom Cunningham March 26, 2021 at 1:55 PM A snack before dinner, well written Krish. Good luck in the contest. Tom Krish Radhakrishna March 26, 2021 at 3:08 PM Thanks Tom! I cannot see myself in her position!! How brave !

L Milton Hankins March 26, 2021 at 1:50 PM Krish, I love your tableau and I found it exceptionally appropriate. GL in the contest. I sent you a Soup Mail. Krish Radhakrishna March 26, 2021 at 3:09 PM Thanks Milton!! cheers and I have chewed off some portion of it! Much appreciated!:)