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in vast ocean blue,
soft light swim these two,
her length width of bite,
razor sharp great white,
she admires his charm,
knows will do no harm!

Written 26/03/2021
2nd placement
Tableau Poetry contest picture 1
6 lines, 5 syllables each line.
Joseph May sponsored

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2021 12:34:00 PM

you got it right. She knew he would do no harm!! Congrats on your win.

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/2/2021 1:00:00 PM

Thanks Andrea! I did not know at the time but from her body language guessed right! There are such wonderful people in the world!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 4/1/2021 11:35:00 AM

Krish, Congratulations. Scary, and bravery!! Best wishes ~ Mala

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/1/2021 12:01:00 PM

Thanks Mala!! Your two words sums that up so well! But oceanographers have to deal with it! I do not know the background of this picture, will be interesting to explore!

Eve Roper

Date: 3/31/2021 9:51:00 PM

Great imagery, Krish, congratulation on you win. Have a blessed Easter. Hugs Eve

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/31/2021 10:47:00 PM

Thanks Eve! You too, wishing a blessed Easter! My warm wishes! Krish

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/31/2021 3:14:00 PM

I like your rhyme, Krish! I certainly wouldn't trust that shark! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/31/2021 10:48:00 PM

Kim Thanks! Some experts do get close and study these Tigers of the deep!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/31/2021 9:02:00 AM

Congrats, kudos and high fives Krish! You turned what could be a very scary picture into a glimpse of a momentary relationship between the powerful and the fragile. I like it! Hope you are doing well.

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/31/2021 10:37:00 AM

Thanks Sam! Yes, positive thinking and all that. there are people who risk their lives and study dangerous creatures so we can live safely! Hats off to them! God bless and keep writing your wonderful poems!