Birthday's Come and Go
My boyfriend is turning 18 in 10 days I wrote this for him , I need feeback so I know if i should use it .................
Birthdays Come and Go
But you'll forever be
the guy who in my dreams
I adoringly see
Birthdays come and go
but my love for you is forever-
sweet and true
Happy birthday baby, I really love you
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