Sara Kendrick Poet Other

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Life has more stages than this I know..

Birthdays

Those birthdays
Beginings
Building blocks

Six to ten
Smooth sailing
Relaxed times

Turbulence
Those teen years
Adulthood?     

My first Tricube poem. The length hinders but it can really open doors to thinking.

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Jack Horne January 28, 2023 at 6:30 AM LOL, yes, those turbulent teens! Great first attempt - I enjoyed the form but found it was trickier than it looks! Sara Kendrick January 28, 2023 at 7:59 AM Jack, Yes, it is not as easy as it seems to be at first sight. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Sotto Poet January 23, 2023 at 6:12 AM This form looks really cool to me. It's like a spot reminder, one word could hinder many thoughts. Interesting Sara. Sara Kendrick January 23, 2023 at 6:32 AM Thank you, Lasaad. Your visits are always uplifting. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen January 23, 2023 at 5:14 AM ...interesting form, Sara ...well done ! - hugs Sara Kendrick January 23, 2023 at 6:29 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise. Your visits are always encouraging. Sara

Victor Buhagiar January 23, 2023 at 3:55 AM Loved you haikus. I'm not much good at them. Sara Kendrick January 23, 2023 at 6:22 AM Thank you, Victor. They are Tricube poetry form. Really these would be closer to Senryu since it is about humans and not nature. Sara