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Life has more stages than this I know..

Those birthdays Beginings Building blocks Six to ten Smooth sailing Relaxed times Turbulence Those teen years Adulthood?
My first Tricube poem. The length hinders but it can really open doors to thinking.

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Date: 1/28/2023 6:30:00 AM
LOL, yes, those turbulent teens! Great first attempt - I enjoyed the form but found it was trickier than it looks!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/28/2023 7:59:00 AM
Jack, Yes, it is not as easy as it seems to be at first sight. Thanks for the visit. Sara
Date: 1/23/2023 6:12:00 AM
This form looks really cool to me. It's like a spot reminder, one word could hinder many thoughts. Interesting Sara.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/23/2023 6:32:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad. Your visits are always uplifting. Sara
Date: 1/23/2023 5:14:00 AM
...interesting form, Sara ...well done ! - hugs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/23/2023 6:29:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. Your visits are always encouraging. Sara
Date: 1/23/2023 3:55:00 AM
Loved you haikus. I'm not much good at them.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/23/2023 6:22:00 AM
Thank you, Victor. They are Tricube poetry form. Really these would be closer to Senryu since it is about humans and not nature. Sara

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