Birthday Wish

Son, you’ll be 27 today
     I just wish the miles
   would go away, so I could say

       HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

    in a more personal way
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 7:35 AM
Aww…such a sweet personal note!
Tor Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 1:35 AM
I hear you there Gershon nothing better than being there with him ans sharing the day.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 11:03 AM
A great "Birthday Wish" write. Your son should be happy he has a writer for a dad. Have a great day writing away..................
Theraven Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 8:10 PM
Gershon, Very warm sentiment in this poem. I wonder about those apart by miles, mountains, or oceans, before the telegram, the telephone, and now the text message. -Richard
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